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How does that sound? I need to take wedding photos in the afternoon (4 hours), and I want to be in the morning. My family has many children, boys especially. so that no ladies only. I do not want to sound snobbish or rude.
Thank you!


"You are cordially invited to the ladies
Mimosa and only bagel Bachelorette Party
In honor of Jane Doe.
Because of the mother-of-the-bride
Doe's mother, with
Friends Thing 1 and
Thing 2 Cake also
served. The event was held on
Mother-of-the-House Bridal Suite
E. 12,345 XX St. N.
Doe, City State, 12345

On Sat, 11 October 2008. Beverages and
Games begin at 10.03 clock

Be sure to confirm your participation, 4 October, so we
put a glass of champagne!
Mother Doe (111) 222-3333 or --
Thing1: (111) 222-3333

The bride is registered
Bed Bath & Beyond "